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When the great wars began, hundreds of clans held dominion over portions of the enormous land, each with their own gods and culture, totems, legends, marriage laws and excuses for combat. For hundreds of years the battles raged, until the forty most ruthless clans had stained the land with the blood of the less ruthless, whose gods simultaneously perished, along with legions of warriors slain and civilians starved and broken. Belief systems were trod into the dust, ground to powder like the small bones of the martyrs underfoot. Gods who had commanded awe for centuries ceased to exist. As part of the living spirit of a people, they expired with the last breaths of the last believers. As fragments of history, they perished with the burning of the holy parchments, the toppling of the holy stones. We only think they might once have existed. With the expansion of the conquering clans, the influence of the victorious gods grew, always in fulfillment of a prophesy that the vengeful gods of the most rapacious warriors would prosper throughout the land. Forty clans, even belligerent clans, might have shared the vast terrain in suspended hostility, but forty gods—fickle, indifferent, arrogant, vindictive—could not. Most had to be killed, but it was not necessary to eliminate the more pragmatic believers, who adopted the conquering gods as a cost of living. Every battlefield victory confirmed the faith of the true worshipers in the power of their gods to deliver them from danger. Each skirmish they survived convinced them, as they took up arms against another god, that they could not die. Now the pretenders lie in waste and the conquerors, rich in spoils, survive to spread the good news of the one true god to lands about which madmen and mystics have dreamt.

Copyright © December 19, 2006

The brain has a fuse. After years of threat and terror, the fuse blows, leaving a scar behind, a charred little plug of once-animated tissue. It can turn a person mean. The bombs hover  over our heads, almost within view. They cast their shadow over all our choices, smart bombs in search of a policy. From the rooftops, we make out, just beyond the harbor, smudges on the horizon, the ships that would deliver the missiles that would deliver us. Where we live, with our heads inside the cannon, the outlook is dark. Every year or so we hear the rumble of guns massing against us. When the international cameras arrive, the ambassador vaults the secretary-general and tramples the prime minister to be first to the podium to denounce us. Just before the elections (everyone else’s; we don’t believe in elections), surgical strikes cripple our ability to make spermicidal jelly. Meanwhile, the blockades turn back dangerous baby formula from our ports. There are more of us every year, and we’re sicker and tireder. Yes, we see the guns. We hear the planes in the no-fly zone. We thumb our noses at the guns. They move closer, they move away, they blast holes in the sand. Meanwhile another generation blows its fuse. Our children don’t know what it is to live without the threat of instant annihilation. On the other hand, they’re not tormented by nostalgia. There’s no going back for us. We would sooner give our wives what they really want than capitulate to the demands of the world. The world can take what we offer or it can kill us. We don’t divorce, and the threat of the big strike no longer means anything. You can kill us, you may have to, but you’d better kill us all.

Copyright © 1999

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  1. davidbdale's avatar

    Thank you so much, anhinga, but I wouldn't want to try it without the other 199. —David

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    All you need is 100 words to make an emotional impact. Touching.

  4. Unknown's avatar

    Brilliant, brother. Just simply brilliant.

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    This Very Short Novel has a strong resemblance to Simple Lessons of War from almost 20 years ago, but is…

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