Dearly beloved, and others, we gather today with heavy hearts to mourn the passing of a cherished individual, me. The greatest loss, of course, is mine, but each of you are also now diminished, unless you hold collateral for what I owe you. Lying here mute with my jaws wired shut, I’m still the whole show, a loss you’ll not soon recover from, and it saddens me to take away the better part of you. The current fashion in funerals is a joyous celebration, but I prefer ritual groaning to sappy remembrances, so rend some garments. In order of magnitude, starting with me, we have each of us suffered a devastating loss, for I was father, husband, brother, son (most of those accidentally), cousin, grandson, nephew (no one asked if I wanted to be), a felon, an adulterer, an unnamed co-conspirator, the boss from hell, a karaoke singer, and the author of a will that should infuriate everyone it names. A complete list would require depositions. The deceased was infamous for the roles he played and for his ruthlessness: with creditors, with other men’s wives, with the mostly-female choir that will sing here tonight. I loved you all, not just your voices. But oh, what delicious backing those voices provided for mine. By way of closing let me say, in relationships with every man of consequence, an urgent intimacy needs to be petted and fed or it will jump the fence and flee to the woods. In my case, it was my dog, who I will truly miss. Dear friends, I was more to you than you knew; and you, to me, were parts that blended with mine. It won’t be much of a requiem without me singing, but do your best. You can blame your performance on grief.
Copyright © December 26, 2006

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December 26, 2006 at 5:02 pm
timethief
I have also written my own eulogy and left very specific directions about how I want my life to be remembered, as opposed to having my demise commemorated.
Sheesh, in my case I’ve been so irrepressible and irreverent that my nearest and dearest would wonder aloud “What veil? She dropped all seven at a moment’s notice!” *rotflmao*
I loved it! Reading your stories is frequently the high point in my day. Thanks David – you shine. 🙂
As your comments often are in mine! Thank you, timethief!
–David
December 26, 2006 at 5:03 pm
timethief
Damn. No ability to edit the mistakes in comment boxes is so very frustrating. 😦
I caught and corrected those I saw.
–David
December 27, 2006 at 3:13 pm
qazse
fun to read as always – interesting angle – is this partially based on a character you know or a composite?
He does seem to contain too many attributes, like most people worth knowing. The whole thing came together when I gave in and combined two stories that demanded to share a single title. Thanks, qazse.
–David
December 28, 2006 at 2:16 pm
patricia
Damn, this is bloody good – “the boss from hell and the author of a will that will infuriate everyone it names” made me laugh out loud.
How I wish I could write like that! Damn and blast you.
Are you tryting to get these gems published? I sincerely hope so. I envision a lovely small hard-bound cloth book, delicate endpapers and a charming small black and white illustration at the beginning of each delicious tale.
It is high praise to be damned and blasted by one so talented! Thank you, Patricia. If only you were a publisher.
–David
December 29, 2006 at 1:00 am
Lola Rogers
This is great fun. “including every female member of the choir…” Delightful. Thanks.
Glad you liked it, Lola.
–David
December 30, 2006 at 11:43 am
litlove
Wonderful! When the moment comes, I can see I shall have to persuade you to write my eulogy, David. Camus says no man can stand the absence of judgement, and if ever there was a dynamic portrait of the judging eye of God, this must be it.
Litlove, I hope that by the time you and I are forced by circumstance to end our correspondences, I’ll have expressed my many appreciations well enough that a brief sampling will be worthy to send you off. But, stay awhile, please.
–David
January 1, 2007 at 10:49 am
David Raho
It is strange I was thinking about writing mine but I thought it might bring my creditors out of the woodwork or worried calls from my life insurance company. My stalker might also get worried and renew her attentions.
I liked the bit about the choir I thought you were writing mine for a moment (smile). My new years resolution is to avoid groups and return to serial monogamy – despite the obvious attractions of the former. Like most resolutions I expect it will be forgotten by February.
Well done!
Thanks, David. Regarding your own eulogy, it’s good to have one in your back pocket, but don’t publish early. Regarding your resolution, I would avoid any pledge that involves less sex. Thanks for commenting early and often: that’s one resoution we should all keep.
–David
January 5, 2007 at 6:09 am
Annelisa
I may not be enamoured by his character and obvious ‘imperfections’ [or traits if you like to look at this way -and maybe have some of them yourself 😀 ], but they unfold beautifully throughout the narrative. At the beginning, I was feeling sorry for him (and a bit miffed with you for doing another dying one at this time of year! 🙂 ), but as his story unfolded, it became more of a natural closing, and one which I wasn’t so unhappy to happen… A goodbye.
Another masterpiece, David!
Thank you, annelisa. They die when I tell them to die.
–David
January 8, 2007 at 11:31 pm
sarah flanigan
funny and charming and i’d expect nothing less, david. it inspires me to try my own hand at this but i’m not sure i could carry it off as you have. well done.
sarah
Thank you, sarah. If you do write your own eulogy, remember to save it for an appropriate occasion.
–David
January 13, 2007 at 5:13 pm
Annelisa
😀 Just as well someone’s got control of these characters’ destinies!
Anyone who hasn’t been there yet should hurry immediately to Words That Flow for your moving tribute to your own dear Dad.
–David